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Monday, February 15, 2021

Book Review: Forever, Phoebe by Chalon Linton

 


 Book Description:

Phoebe Jamison possesses a personality as fiery as her red hair, a fact all too often criticized. When the newest resident of Somerset, Mr. Franklin Everly, is drawn to Phoebe's spirited nature, their friendship quickly deepens into a thrilling connection. But soon an unforeseen danger arrives, and Phoebe must rely on her own strength to avoid becoming the next victim.

Excerpt:

Somerset, England, May 1814
 
Phoebe Jamison huffed and folded her arms. Would William Mason ever see her as more than the younger sister of her brother Peter? She’d been out for nearly eleven months, and while she’d danced with William at several dinners and the annual ball in the Assembly Rooms, he’d spent the entirety of this particular dance chastising her for allowing Mr. Baldwin to hold her too closely during the previous set. She’d thought Mr. Mason’s concern meant something. If he was worried for her reputation, surely, it meant he cared.
 
Her dance with Mr. Mason ended, and he escorted Phoebe from the floor. “Proper young ladies do not pout, Miss Jamison.” He looked across the room, and his dark-brown eyes lit as he spied Miss Judith Benson. “You would do well to follow Miss Benson’s example. See how her smile affects those she’s conversing with? It is rather pleasing.” He led Phoebe to Peter’s side. Phoebe wanted to grab the lapels of Mr. Mason’s jacket and shake him. Why couldn’t he find her pleasing? For years she’d tried to be the perfect lady, conforming to everything she thought he wanted yet continually falling short.
 
Hannah Vane, Phoebe’s dear friend and confidante, walked to where Phoebe stood. “I’ve just heard the most delightful bit of gossip.” Hannah swayed her shoulders. “The new resident at Ravencrest has agreed to make an appearance this evening.” Mr. Mason scoffed. Hannah leaned close and whispered, “The supposedly handsome single gentleman from Ravencrest.” She covered her giggle with her hand.
 
Butterflies fluttered through Phoebe’s stomach. No matter her admiration for Mr. Mason, a new arrival was always cause for excitement. “You ladies should discuss topics of greater import,” Mr. Mason said. “Seeking out a handsome husband is of great import,” Hannah said, dismissing Mr. Mason’s comment. “The benefits far outweigh the effort exerted in making elaborately embroidered pillows.”
 
“Miss Vane speaks the truth,” Peter said. “Besides, I’ve never cared for embroidered pillows.” Phoebe shook her head at her brother’s teasing. Mr. Mason shifted, and a section of black hair fell across his forehead. He brushed his hair aside as his gaze once again wandered to Miss Benson, and Phoebe watched a myriad of expressions wash over his face. He looked back at her, quickly scooped up her hand, and bowed over her fingers. “It is always a pleasure dancing with you, Miss Jamison.” His eyes met hers. “I do hope you’ll remember my admonition.”
 
Phoebe yanked her hand free from his grasp. Conversations between her and Mr. Mason always seemed to end in the same manner. She had hoped that perhaps his perception of her as a silly girl had shifted to respect or even admiration, but Mr. Mason was nothing if not consistent. He chastised her behavior, corrected or quietly rebuked her opinions, and never offered a glimmer of hope. Phoebe oft wondered why she thought their relationship could ever change. Perhaps pining for William Mason had been part of her life for so long she knew no other option.

Rorie's Review:

This story has an unusual but fun family dynamic, with Phoebe's parents traveling and it being just her and her three brothers. I enjoyed getting to know them and to see how they interacted with each other. 

I was a little surprised that Mr Mason didn't play more of a part near the end of the book. I honestly thought there would be more to that part of the story and kind of feel like that part just...ended...

The mystery of the Bride Snatcher plays a pretty minimal part throughout most of the story, until there were only a few chapters remaining. While I enjoyed the basic idea of it, I wish it had been fleshed out more throughout the entire story. It felt rushed to me, having it all crammed in at the end. 

Phoebe and Franklin's relationship was fun - especially since she's such a spitfire. I can only imagine what life will be like for the both of them continuing on. 

While there were a few things that could use some work in this story, I enjoyed it overall, and I hope that Phoebe's brothers get their own stories in the future.
 
Andrea's Review:
 
Phoebe is a fiery character and her uncommon (for the time) actions made for an entertaining read. I also liked Franklin and the relationship Phoebe had with her brothers.

I didn’t feel like the mystery added to the story. It came across as an afterthought with little mentions of a kidnapper here and there, and then a chapter or so to bring it to the forefront.

I like this author. Although this wasn’t my favorite of her books, I would read more from her.
 
 
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Title: Forever Phoebe
Author: Chalon Linton
Publisher: Covenant Communications, Inc.
Published: February 2021
ISBN: 1524416886
Source: We received copies from the publisher and Netgalley. All opinions expressed are our own. 

 

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